![]() ![]() Replay-value does not need a hyphen and you can wikilink it (didn't know such an article existed).'claimed that Ben Chandler, the game's designer' I think you mean 'artist', game designers design the actual gameplay.'who also worked on previous Wadjet Eye Games' I don't think you meant to capitalize games here.'Unavowed is built using the Adventure Game Studio engine' change to 'Unavowed was built with the Adventure Game Studio engine'.'It was the first game Gilbert has written since 2014' change to 'It was the first game Gilbert wrote since 2014'.'in March 2016 in a post in the Adventure Game Studio forums' change to 'in March 2016 on the Adventure Game Studio forums'.If it's more organic, try writing 'If the first or second endings are triggered.' Rephrased (It's basically the result of the last conversation in which you can choose to defy the protagonist, join them, kill their body or force to release you by threatening to kill their body. Is this truly a choice made by the player, or are these endings each the result of several different choices made during the game? They way it's written, it sounds like a box comes up and literally asks the player what ending option to choose. In the last paragraph, you say 'choosing the first or second option' and 'choosing the third or fourth option'.Since this is the first time Wadjet Eye is mentioned in the body, link it, as well as Blackwell series.Then move the stuff about combat and save files to the end of the final paragraph in gameplay. ![]() I suggest merging this paragraph into the first between '.influenced by the player's choices.' and 'All characters feature.'. I was confused about how the game played until I read the second paragraph.
0 Comments
Leave a Reply. |
AuthorWrite something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview. ArchivesCategories |